Review Detail of Edward98 in The Throne Of God

Item: The Throne Of God
Rating: 3.6

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Edward98Lv103yrEdward98

Gave it a shot, I read far worse but honestly it still has so many problems, that I wouldn’t know where to start... Surely pace and the way this world is presented just to name the first thing it comes to miNd The best way to get better is keep writing.

The Throne Of God

KazuyaVermillion

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KazuyaVermillionAuthorKazuyaVermillion

Thanks for review! You are right. This is my first time writing. So i know there are many mistakes. Thanks for your corrections and advices. I really appreciate. I will edit and be more careful in next chapters. Also, I will read more books to improve my writing. Thanks again😇

3yr