Review Detail of sagorika_adhikari in When Alpha created Omega

Item: When Alpha created Omega
Rating: 4.4

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sagorika_adhikariLv53yrsagorika_adhikari

Nice story there but I would advise, you proofread your work and remove the typos. Otherwise, the story flows nicely. Like the concept as well as the narration. Keep up the good work.

When Alpha created Omega

NoahSky

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NoahSkyAuthorNoahSky

Thank you 😊 Gramer is my weakest point. Im working on it, soon I will try out grammerly app. I love constructive criticism 😇

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