I really like your plot, it is so intriguing and I was totally inmersed from the beginning. and that's great. I am really loving the story. I suggest that you do some editing as there are grammatical errors that I noticed and they may cut the flow of the story. Overall, it is a worth reading and I really hope for more updates. Keep up with the good work author! I will keep it in my library! đ
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