If im going to be honest it was good at first. it showed who ended up hair but in the end there was no closure. he never got his revenge at all[img=faceslap]
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( ´◡‿ゝ◡`) Thank you for ur kind review. I am glad u enjoyed ur time with my story. About the revenge part, I also kind of had the idea of letting Ivar reincarnate in his original world and get his revenge against the main characters at first but then I was experimenting and thought wouldn't it be wonderful if he stumbles across the god(aka author's) other world and instead of his original world he destroys the author's other world. Because in his orginal world he had already destroyed the world killing all the main characters and other mob characters with his self destruction. That's why instead of repeating a revenge in his original world I thought I should let his revenge go beyond where he was created that's why I opted for his revenge against the god who made him by letting Ivar discover the god's other precious world then let him destroy it beyond recognition.😉 As I said I was experimenting so I liked the idea of his revenge going beyond where he was born in to other worlds of the author's other worlds.😈Hehe. The idea of his revenge crosing his world boundaries sounded more tempting to me so i went ahead with it. As he had already destroyed the world he was born in by killing everyone with his self destruction. Also, after meeting Wang Lei Ivar changed. Remember how in the first three arcs he was shaken up by my ML, and he said to himself "Make me choose you over my revenge" to himself refering to Wang Lei while giving him a chance? That was a foreshadow as to how Ivar will choose Wang Lei in the end after falling in love with him. 🌝 Once he destroyed his god's other world he got the closure he needed then moved on to his love life. Hope this gives you some insight into the reason why I did it with the plot.
