Review Detail of EditorBr0701 in Ben 10: Apex Hero
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I haven't read the first chapter yet, but just reading your "chapter pilot introduction" has already made you like this fanfic, you seem to understand a lot about the original work (unlike some people who only see three episodes and already think of it as enough content to create a fic), which already makes me very happy. I'm going to read your first chapter and I hope it's not just another good fanfic thrown out. Ah! Before I forget, I'm also BR, so it doesn't matter if your English is refined or not, because mine is certainly much worse (according to my English teacher I'm "SIMPLY, VERY BAD!" Kkk)
Ben 10: Apex Hero
Daichi_TBR193
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After reading and deeply analyzing each paragraph of the wonder that this first chapter was, I realized that this fanfic really has the potential to be incredible, I like how the author developed Ben's first 10 years of life, making his mentality and future goals clear (at least your next steps). About your writing, well, I didn't really notice anything wrong, but that doesn't mean much since my English notes, well ... what was I really talking about? Ah yes, with regard to its history, from what I see I only managed to find an error and unfortunately that error is very serious that it is ... THE LACK OF MORE CHAPTERS !!! WHERE IS IT?!! I NEED THIS TO BE HAPPY! NO! I NEED MORE FROM THIS WONDER TO BE ABLE TO SURVIVE !!! In the end, this is a 10/10 fanfic, at least it's the note I give for this wonderful start.
Daichi_TBR193:Thanks for the support! ππ Please, after reading the first chapter, tell me what you think of it. You can be as honest as possible, Iβm open to all form of criticism. π π§π·π§π·π§π·π§π·π§π·π§π·π§π·π§π·π§π·π§π·π§π·π§π·
Thanks π it really means a lot! π Perhaps I can convince you to check out my other stories π if not, no problem. π
EditorBr0701:After reading and deeply analyzing each paragraph of the wonder that this first chapter was, I realized that this fanfic really has the potential to be incredible, I like how the author developed Ben's first 10 years of life, making his mentality and future goals clear (at least your next steps). About your writing, well, I didn't really notice anything wrong, but that doesn't mean much since my English notes, well ... what was I really talking about? Ah yes, with regard to its history, from what I see I only managed to find an error and unfortunately that error is very serious that it is ... THE LACK OF MORE CHAPTERS !!! WHERE IS IT?!! I NEED THIS TO BE HAPPY! NO! I NEED MORE FROM THIS WONDER TO BE ABLE TO SURVIVE !!! In the end, this is a 10/10 fanfic, at least it's the note I give for this wonderful start.