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Primordiales
PrimordialesLv34yr
2020-10-17 05:05

It's disgusting, I really tried but, it is impossible to read this, it is not even funny ... The truth is, I would prefer that instead of reincarnating Ethan you would have done an Oc as Merlin since you like his character so much that you put it at each chapter point for about 15 entire chapters my god is disgusting, this novel is not worth it is a pure disgusting truth ..

Living The Cliche Life

TurkishJesus
3.8
70 Chs

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Primordiales
PrimordialesLv3

Now that I get rid of my hatred with that previous review, I am going to say why this novel is rubbish .... The truth is, the mc is a Beta mc that I already have for sure, reincarnation of a system that only serves to see the status, an inventory and world travel, the truth is that I like the system after all I like the progression of power, in addition to the system they gave occlusion: a dark magic from Harry Potter, this magic allows you to create a mental landscape where the user of this is God practically since he can create anything with imagination, in addition to being able to order memories, among many things, the truth is that this magic is not omnipotent but brother, no one should have been able to read his mind, entering dreams is not the same as Being able to read minds, really, this made me too disgusting, after all you gave him that magic and he does not use it since in the end Merlin can enter his dreams and see his memories. It's boring to the balls, Nelson appears half of the chapters above that are short Merlin has to appear 1/2 of the chapter shitting the story, I assume that the author took it as comedy ... There is no romance here, Morgan is a robot stereotype without feelings, it has no substance, the mc already thought about the first chapter about the harem, so if you want a decent mc forget it, mc beta, mc pervert, mc slave..you have everything to leave the novel there, but you had to make those disturbing jokes about Merlin and the dragon that disgusts man, the novel is rubbish the truth is useless, the 5-star ratings for sure are bots no one should like this rubbish .... Well bye see it if you want but look if someone read more than 15 chapters, if the story improves because the truth up to here is an absolute trash reverend .. bye

4yr
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beta mc? well I'm gone

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The premise is somewhat interesting and the mc has somewhat an interesting personality. There are times when it seems that the characters couldn't be bothered to care about events, which make sense since author even wrote that he wasn't familiar with the world he sent mc too, which begs the question as to why he would send mc to that world in the first place. Other than that an ok read.

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Kreuz8
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it's a wish fulfilment with an ending!!! what else can i ask? sometimes we need some good wish fulfilment before going back to those originals with extra dose of suffering. why is almost all original have some kind of messed up back story MC? can we have a Ethan instead?

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