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YaoYaoLv44yr
2020-10-19 10:28

hey, I thought no ones translate this awesome novel, I've read the raw when the raw novel still 20ish chapters, and I love it. I hope someone can continue to translate this novel, the last time I read the raw novel is still on Marvel, I tried to not read the raw because I want to read it after the Marvel volume done. So far the world in this novel is : Naruto , One Piece , To Aru Series , Fate Series , Marvel

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To make clear this is a criticism of the original novel not of this translation (because I am already reading in the last update) Good points of the novel ... 1.The things are all in order and you can see the way the world is represented is consistent, what are the world rules and development of the system that governs the universe. 2. the characters do not go out of their respective character. All the characters are very well written and developed, although little information is available about them. 3.The plot runs smoothly. No matter what situation is presented in the novel, it does not go out of line, although this has nothing to do with the cannon. 4. The idea is great and well designed, the limits are well represented so as not to exaggerate. 5. Many interesting themes are presented according to the personality and morals of the characters. Be it political, cultural, emotional, philosophical. Bad points of the novel ... 1. Money is the only thing that represents as important up to a fourth-degree, if it does not have it, it loses the opportunity, later in the plot, it is settled only to a certain degree. 2. The MC does not have any partner (not so important) but it feels strange that this is not due to the development of the plot or the MC's decision at some point, but rather that the MC makes it clear that he is looking for it and wants the feeling. But the author said that there will be only for being bad writing that. 3. The biggest and biggest problem to take into account, of which I almost left the novel, if it weren't for the fact that it has many interesting things going for it, I would have already left it. Is that the MC can know the feelings/wishes/thoughts of the other characters. That ruins the plot in various ways. And this was done by the author mainly to make things easier for the MC, also to prevent the other characters from approaching the MC with any kind of relationship on a personal level and seeing him as an existence superior to them and impossible to socialize. Lastly, this may be good or bad, depending on the person. Is that the novel does not follow the original line of the cannon at all, the story only focuses on altering everything according to the commercial personal interest of the MC. With all the above mentioned, I would like to know if anyone knows any web page that is translated in the last update of chapter 800. I would like to read it again, but this time already translated, because I read it from one of the original pages in Chinese, and some words escaped me, and the names they always tend to translate into Chinese from Japanese and that gives them another meaning completely different most of the time, a good part of the names of the characters I guessed only by their character or their powers. LOL

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