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Ancient_Dream
Ancient_DreamAuthor3yrAncient_Dream

"Netori is good, Netorare is evil." (This Novel's Motto) . . I just wrote this novel out of boredom so I don't have clear outline what would happen on the latter chapters. This novel would also have a little bit of action so uhm yeah. . . Please, refrain from rude and mean comments because I have a fragile heart. Of course meaningful feedback and constructive criticism are welcome.

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I Received a Sex System From The Goddess of Lust and Beauty

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RandomIsGood
RandomIsGoodLv5RandomIsGood

Hey author what's the source for the cover page? I want it pls thx.

Venom_God
Venom_GodLv12Venom_God

Ahhh.... ur not going survive if u have that kind of heart

Venom_God
Venom_GodLv12Venom_God

Lol u should change the average looking tag cuz mc has *** system and that improves everything that attracts others ***

Silent_Void
Silent_VoidLv12Silent_Void

true

Venom_God:Ahhh.... ur not going survive if u have that kind of heart
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Class012
Class012Lv2Class012

Hello author I like where the plot is going especially the netori part anyway what are your 1st and 2nd languages

Ancient_Dream
Ancient_DreamAuthorAncient_Dream

It's Ilocano and Tagalog ;)

Class012:Hello author I like where the plot is going especially the netori part anyway what are your 1st and 2nd languages
Ancient_Dream
Ancient_DreamAuthorAncient_Dream

She's Lust from Book Eating Magician, it's a nice korean novel. I recommend you to read it. :) You can find her character illustration from **********, just google it.

RandomIsGood:Hey author what's the source for the cover page? I want it pls thx.
RandomIsGood
RandomIsGoodLv5RandomIsGood

Can u write that last part again it got censored thx

Ancient_Dream:She's Lust from Book Eating Magician, it's a nice korean novel. I recommend you to read it. :) You can find her character illustration from **********, just google it.
Ancient_Dream
Ancient_DreamAuthorAncient_Dream

W**iaworld ** = ux

RandomIsGood:Can u write that last part again it got censored thx
LohQiwan
LohQiwanLv2LohQiwan

So author are you going to enhance mc’s facial features because Yh I agree with venom god, since mc has a *** system than he should be able to get anything that he needs in order to increase his *** appeal such as his body, face, strenght etc to make woman more willing so please

Ancient_Dream:W**iaworld ** = ux
Ancient_Dream
Ancient_DreamAuthorAncient_Dream

As of the moment I don't plan to make MC look better, but make his aura more charming enough to make ladies look at him twice if they ever pass by each other.

LohQiwan:So author are you going to enhance mc’s facial features because Yh I agree with venom god, since mc has a *** system than he should be able to get anything that he needs in order to increase his *** appeal such as his body, face, strenght etc to make woman more willing so please
LohQiwan
LohQiwanLv2LohQiwan

Oh alright, that is enough as the story is only in its begging phase :) Yh it would be quite boring if mc just straight up look’s handsomely gorgeous straight away, alright I will read your novel and hopefully enjoy it but from the tags I’m already feeling excited :D

Ancient_Dream:As of the moment I don't plan to make MC look better, but make his aura more charming enough to make ladies look at him twice if they ever pass by each other.
Zack_Kenway
Zack_KenwayLv4Zack_Kenway

villan pop up alert???????. He sure has trouble magnet, without doing anything he has got himself in an assassination attempt.

HeiLangKuiEn
HeiLangKuiEnLv11HeiLangKuiEn

bababa ba

Ancient_Dream:It's Ilocano and Tagalog ;)
LoveIsHarem
LoveIsHaremLv1LoveIsHarem

I have a question. will you get this intro premium and locked the chapters?

diosdiablos
diosdiablosLv4diosdiablos

theres a difference?

Fynx
FynxLv10Fynx

I’m already starting to like you because of that (motto)

Delsin_TM
Delsin_TMLv4Delsin_TM

ok

Deadrule_vivek
Deadrule_vivekLv5Deadrule_vivek

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Kpnovellover
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i like the motto