Writing quality was splendid but I have seen few typos. You can use grammarly keyboard for the finishing touches. Story development was nice. The character design was also worthy of praise. I feel bad for the Mc for being mistreated but that was him being a potential badass in the future. Updating stability was, well ot has stopped so author please resume the story. Your readers were waiting for you. And last World background. You were detailed on it and I can imagine where he was and what is his surroundings. Over all nice job. I hope it gets popular in the future because it deserves it. BTW I hope you will review mine called "Waking Up In Undead World". I will wait for your response! See you!
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