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KyleSullivanJr
KyleSullivanJrLv144yr
2020-11-03 17:16

Very poetic and a unique start for the story. Definitely created a great bleak backstory for her. A few tweaks here and there, but the over all nothing hurt the story at all. This story has potential to be pretty good

Disrobe

Jinfiction
4.9
95 Chs

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Jinfiction
JinfictionAuthor

Hello, It's the author of this book. Just checking in to draft a shameless review for my book. What had initially started as a short series has tuned into a full blown novel. The pace in the beginning is rather rushed but over the time (6 chapters on), it reaches the appropriate pace for a novel. I'm persistent on having used good grammar and best believe, errors are minimum. In case an error is spotted, please don't hesitate to correct me. I have a poetic way of writing and emotions coupled with background story and character development are essential in the success of this book. I'm a medical student and writing Disrobe alongside the academic journey I'm undertaking, provides me great relief. All in all, Disrobe is a Historical Romance Fiction with twists and turns, hidden secrets and an unrestricted plethora of emotions. I'd recommend it, 100%

4yr

nami37
nami37Lv1

ive been following from the start... uour writing skills are really good.. the way every word were said was really facinating... and also for armies who like an ancient style of story this is really good for you✨✨

4yr
utsah_sunar
utsah_sunarLv1

the writer's play with words is amazing.. how can one bring another into a whole different world through words... great writing is an understatement. :)

4yr
meghana2529
meghana2529Lv2

I am so proud of you! I have been following you just after you created your account for some time. I am so proud of your growth. You deserve every bit of it. 사랑안다 ❤️

4yr
K_hmmm
K_hmmmLv10

Finally!! A writer who knows how to build suspense!! I’ve followed Jinfiction since before Disrobe and this person has some serious skills!! Thank you for the inticing read!!

3yr
the_lost_soul
the_lost_soulLv2

Some amazing olay of words! 🌼🌼💜💜 The plot so interesting that it keeps the reader wondering so many things after every chapter🤩🤩🤩 The author is doing a good job 👍👍👍💯💯

3yr
Purplebride
PurplebrideLv6

Just 17 chapters in and I'm craving for more. Author's writing and the poetic style just wowed me.The suspense and the tension building up between the MC and the ML is worth noticing. I will be waiting for more chapters to under the ML more and will return with another review. This book is amazing and i recommend it to anyone looking for a story with unique writing style.

4yr
Jiminsssiii
JiminsssiiiLv1

I've been avidly reading this story since the very beginning. It has created such a dent in the world of historical fiction and the appropriate blend of romance, thriller and drama makes it the perfect binge. The author is so hardworking. Makes an effort to clear the storyline. The plot with the strong female lead and an equally strong male lead makes this a winning plot. If this gets published as a book, I will buy it. As long as it is Jinfiction's work, quality is always assured and never a disappointment!! Mark my words this book will be made into a tv show or movie! It's that good

4yr
Delphi_777
Delphi_777Lv3

Reveal spoiler

3yr
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