Review Detail of WorldMonarch in In Naruto: Reborn with Talent
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the story was developing pretty good from chapters 1 to 8, but at chapter 9 it all went down hill with the soul link bs, in my opinion if the author was gonna link souls he could of done something like if one persons chakra increases so does the others, or something in the line of them feeling where they are to never be separated or to feel each other's emotions , but no the author went with some bs that when the mc links his soul to a person they will gain his 3 talents the things that make him unique, while he gains absolutely nothing all because the author doesn't want to make him OP but is willing to make his girls OP. Another thing that is BS was in how the author said the MC gets nothing from the people(his harem members most likely) he links his soul with because it will take away their uniqueness but its alright for them to gain the MC talents basically the only thing that makes him unique. sorry if I when on a tangent, I really thought this story had potential but after reading that soul link BS it became extremely disappointing.
In Naruto: Reborn with Talent
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The author likes soul links and has fully admitted that most if not all of his stories with have some variation of a souk link. Which is perfectly fine because it's his story and honestly this, to me, is one of the best Naruto fanfics I've read. His women only get minor/middle talents in his 3 talents which are either Supreme or God level talents, it's really not a big deal and just helps them keep up with him. Without these minor talents they'd still be plenty strong but they would always be weaker than him, now they can potentially be his equals. I honestly don't know why so many people dislike this, they seem to think it takes away from the MC making him less unique or less powerful. Yet not one of his women fights the same way he does or really even does the same things he's doing because they are much less talented in those areas and their talents lay elsewhere. It's far from ruining the story and to judge a few hundred chapter amazing story off of chapter 9 just because of their assumptions... I don't know what to say honestly lol.
Soul links are lazy writing, and lazy writing ruins a story. It’s just the author’s excuse to avoid having to expand on thier relationship with realistic interaction and instead simply say their soul bound, it’s also kind of off putting to see the mc become more of just the perspective we view the world from instead of an interesting character with unique ability’s, because let’s face it, vendoring out the mcs ability’s to every girl he stick his sea serpent into is just plain brain dead XD
Kazaril_M:The author likes soul links and has fully admitted that most if not all of his stories with have some variation of a souk link. Which is perfectly fine because it's his story and honestly this, to me, is one of the best Naruto fanfics I've read. His women only get minor/middle talents in his 3 talents which are either Supreme or God level talents, it's really not a big deal and just helps them keep up with him. Without these minor talents they'd still be plenty strong but they would always be weaker than him, now they can potentially be his equals. I honestly don't know why so many people dislike this, they seem to think it takes away from the MC making him less unique or less powerful. Yet not one of his women fights the same way he does or really even does the same things he's doing because they are much less talented in those areas and their talents lay elsewhere. It's far from ruining the story and to judge a few hundred chapter amazing story off of chapter 9 just because of their assumptions... I don't know what to say honestly lol.