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Review Detail of MoonSon in In Naruto: Reborn with Talent

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MoonSon
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In general, the story is good ... I liked Tsunade's change, after all Dan only took advantage of a vulnerable woman, I don't like him, so it's not a big problem. For me the main problem was this fusion of souls that doesn't make any sense, but that part is not so bad, since the author explained that they remain different and separate, although it doesn't make any sense, if he said this is how soul fusion works in his fiction, then this is how it works. The bad part of it is that it seems totally unidirectional, he doesn't seem to have gained anything while she gained his talent, even if a little worse, but the difference seems to be very small. I saw different people talking about what he could have won and why he would have won it, but the only thing the author says is that he didn’t win this or that because he would become strong very quickly ... Which just makes it seem extremely forced, she gains talent that was given exclusively to him by a superior being and he gains nothing because the author does not seem to want him to become strong very quickly, with no explanation of why she won so much and he won so little or nothing.

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In Naruto: Reborn with Talent

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Sudden_Young
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It is china cultivashion they like ci, ki ,and other When japons like rpg ,canon somtaems

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Imo the author used the Waifu Catalog as an inspiration for the different special "powers" the protag has, from insane talent in almost all ninja arts to training up his girls up to ridiculous levels, or the personally designed pocket dimension, up to and including the borderline enslaving "love" he can make girls feel for himself. It's not a clear copypasta but a lot of the, if not "mechanics" of the Waifu Catalog then the underlying logic of it keeps popping up as the story goes.