Review Detail of Plot_armour in In Naruto: Reborn with Talent
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Tbh the sole fact that he could do something like merging fking souls in such a short time is already retarded. God literally gave him the talents he own. He shouldn't be able to share as it should be in the core of his soul not in some cornor of his soul. Tbh this whole merging thing was just unnecessary. It would have been way way better if konans individual talent was explored. In conan it was enough for her to become an s rank. If explored more it could probably make her quite op.in future mc could probably make her more powerful with his seals or something. He didn't touch senjetsu because it was dangerous but he touched his souls and merged them when he doesn't know shit about souls??? tbh I like the story so I won't drop but this soul thingy took it down to four star for me. It was too forced. He should just remove the whole soul part as it doesn't affect much rn but his choice I guess
In Naruto: Reborn with Talent
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well i liked the soul bound thingy. its like his other nnaruto fanfic he made loyalty love seal keyed to himself then he got guilty so he put it on himself and keyed it to his harem. the soul binding thingy is just like that but it shared the soul and talent so i think they can respawn later on. i mean if konan dies( ii mean she wont maybe) but i think he can revive her cause the soul is connected he just need to remake the body. its for feeding the harem
It's just too forced and was way way early. Author just wants mcs harem to not lag behind which is understandable but he is nerfing mc or adding bs like soul merging for the sake of it which is dumb. As long as mcs harem is strong even if mc can solo all of them it's fine
iori143:well i liked the soul bound thingy. its like his other nnaruto fanfic he made loyalty love seal keyed to himself then he got guilty so he put it on himself and keyed it to his harem. the soul binding thingy is just like that but it shared the soul and talent so i think they can respawn later on. i mean if konan dies( ii mean she wont maybe) but i think he can revive her cause the soul is connected he just need to remake the body. its for feeding the harem
I am still reading this just because mc isn't loyal to any village and doesn't have a hero complex nor does he hesitate to kill people. If you ignore the soul thing its a decent story so far
GravityGod:Does it get better because after reading chapter 9 or 10 I don't even want to read this anymore.
And if you ignore the fact that after they merge souls she got all her talents while he got nothing from her, konan is like MC, but with more chakra and can use papers.
Plot_armour:I am still reading this just because mc isn't loyal to any village and doesn't have a hero complex nor does he hesitate to kill people. If you ignore the soul thing its a decent story so far
CodezL:And if you ignore the fact that after they merge souls she got all her talents while he got nothing from her, konan is like MC, but with more chakra and can use papers.
CodezL:And if you ignore the fact that after they merge souls she got all her talents while he got nothing from her, konan is like MC, but with more chakra and can use papers.
CodezL:And if you ignore the fact that after they merge souls she got all her talents while he got nothing from her, konan is like MC, but with more chakra and can use papers.
iori143:well i liked the soul bound thingy. its like his other nnaruto fanfic he made loyalty love seal keyed to himself then he got guilty so he put it on himself and keyed it to his harem. the soul binding thingy is just like that but it shared the soul and talent so i think they can respawn later on. i mean if konan dies( ii mean she wont maybe) but i think he can revive her cause the soul is connected he just need to remake the body. its for feeding the harem
Well i agree that its unecessary you know like no reason to poke yourr soul this early in the novel but i would love it if the author make this kind of merge from between konan and the mc only. i remember thats its by accident and if the mc intentionally do it next time then i will tottlay agree with you But i like that there is some unique to the novel that is not tackle in the original
CodezL:And if you ignore the fact that after they merge souls she got all her talents while he got nothing from her, konan is like MC, but with more chakra and can use papers.
While this maybe fantasy people still like to see something that makes sense. This soul merge thing doesn't make sense at all (as mc didn't do senjutsu becz it's dangerous but this soul thing was 1000 times more dangerous) and tbh alot of people including me want the main character to be unique and stronger not only from people around him but also his harem. Besides if you see the story now it's quite clear that it has been 30+ chapters and mc has not done anything to get stronger. Why? Becz author wants mcs woman to be in the same power level as mc which is stupid asf as mc has way too many cheats.tbh it's only a matter of time before author completely ruins the story becz of his obsession towards an equally stronger harem.
Daoist9yPB03:I whole heartedly don't understand the hate it's rather unique to be done like this and it makes sense a permanent bond that show there unrelenting love for the MC and they both get to reap the rewards it's a win win and I enjoy the idea of it. This is just my opinion pls understand that
Since this novel has so many ratings rather than adding mine I'd prefer to update on this one. I also didn't like the soul merging thing quite a bit but kept reading because I'm not a masochist jealous bastard that dislikes a woman being stronger than him, (If anything, if my woman was stronger than me in some regard, I'd feel proud instead) Don't be disheartened and keep reading after chapter 8 as this doesn't really impact the story a lot. The issue is the author did wrong by overpraising Konan's prowess at any turn (even to the point of making MC frustrated because she's more talented) a lot of things regarding chakra and whatnot also don't make sense, but here I only see stupid people trying to make sense out of the magic that of course... doesn't make any sense... Another issue I see in this novel is the overly sexualized society, which I believe is not totally wrong but I think the author focuses too much on the kunoichi prostitutes, the depraved young masters trying to rape little girls, and clans deflowering their girls from a young age... There are many more atrocities that could happen in a world like that rather than just the sexual-oriented ones. My last complaint would be regarding that Himeno woman, the Mizukage's woman. That was such a waste of a good OC man... I loved her background, loved her wits, and loved how she was a great and consoling wife, what a waste of her to have such a husband and even die a meaningless death like that. For the first time since I started reading, despite the fact that she was raped, deflowered early, and even have children with the Mizukage, I was hoping MC would steal her away and she would join the harem no Joke. She was smart, motherly, loyal, etc... What waste man I preferred her much more than Ringo. Whatever a nice read and I hope it is not dropped.