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noradotLv143yr
2021-08-22 04:06

This was overall, a great story. There were a couple of places the structure was confusing because a POV change was sometimes a time change as well. It is a great story and I would love to read a sequel!

Omega to Luna

Kirsten_Raymond
4.6
51 Chs

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at first was excited to read but this story was all over the place and it ended without a true ending I was left feeling under enthused didn't understand story concept

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