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RedSonia
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2021-03-21 20:07

The writing is choppy with short sentences and mistakes but I kept on reading because I love stories about werewolves. I mean, a hunky+powerful ML who is devoted to his mate, how can you not like those stories? But this novel left me with a sour aftertaste. The FL had a difficult childhood (to say it mildly), and she doesn't give ML a chance. Other than ML having negative EQ and FL being unbelievably stubborn, throughout the whole story, ML and FL are manipulated by others and they don't get a break. With the title 'from Omega to Luna', I would expect that FL becomes Luna at the end (aka to accept her mate), but that doesn't happen so other than being anxious while reading this novel as they are falling from one trap into another, I also didn't get any closing.

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