Item: HARRY POTTER: Causing Chaos in the Wizarding world
Rating: 5
Author: Uksmal

UksmalLv44yr

2020-10-07 01:48

The story starts well. A smart MC with an influential house behind him. I hope the author complies and doesn't force the MC to help Potter when he has nothing to gain, as other authors did. Potter has a plot armor and an old man on his ass that manipulates every part of his life, he will keep him alive until he is no longer useful.

HARRY POTTER: Causing Chaos in the Wizarding world

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