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The novel has its own interesting plot! I really like the kind of names you included there such as unsatisfied, unbothered, and more! I invite all new readers to please read this book! The advises that I can give you, author, is you need to edit a bit more on your sentences. Everything is good and everything is perfectly placed, however, there are some phrases that is very difficult to comprehend. It will be more exciting if it was made into faint simple terms or descriptions. Overall, I feel intrigued on reading your book and wish for the best results for your novel!
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