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This is awesome story with high potential. Writer has followed the rule of 'first three golden chps' perfectly. in just first two chps you can enjoy sorrow, pain, comady, drama, and actions. perfect package. The writing quality is very good. I mean there is still chance of development, but I guess nothing is perfect, so it's alright. The story development is good. I mean u won't find scenes crawling like snail. Now about character design. Author has good skills to describe the characters. When I read the story it felt like I'm listening a story from someone mor then reading it. The world background is good. u will feel it as u read. Instead of feeding you directly author will let you imagine it. Overall good story and one should definitely read it to get something different from regular. Keep it up author.🥰♥️