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NebulousArcana
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Look I kinda opted out after like I think chap 5 was it, I thought it was a bit stupid how things were explained because as an outsider looking in, the 'story' from his childhood to U.A was kinda eh and his 'training' n' overall head space as an MC wasn't really compellingly or even remotely written competently enough to make the flow when reading somewhat exciting I mean it's a -clichè to competent hero- type story so why am I just stuck reading bars of chalky text about powers that won't be relevant unless the fight scenes are spectacular? We're introduced to zero of the fascinating ways things can play out after reincarnating or basically any comedic or interesting uses of his abilities that he can find on his own, what I got was just skipping training because "being a kid is cool and relaxing!" :c it really disappointed me, even with the throw in of him actually bothering to spend his time learning subjects he had an interest in, in his previous life he just feels like... well a dumbass. I removed the story from my Library and then reading list but the app still finds a need to notify me of updates, so periodically I'd read chaps after stuff I really enjoy like -Custom Made Demon King-, -The Oracle Paths-, -Supreme Magus- or -Reverend Insanity- when they don't update and the the Authors who make really cool fan-fics get discouraged when writing or just don't have the time n' reduce their steady paced publishing to meager novel update chaps once every two weeks.... Point is between work and sleep I've gotten up to chap 14 of this 'novel' and I don't really get why there are so many people bullying people making honest reviews or comments on chapters. Like dead ass I love his powers but what the author is doing to the characters that I know, and the world that I love, it just makes me kinda cringe. This isn't a bash review I honest to god don't understand what anyone is protecting, literally gave Izuku a quirk but still made him shy, calmed Bakugou down, put tetsu tetsu of all people in class 1-A, then fuxked the school schedule so that there's no possible way the incident with the school gate and the stealing of 1-A's schedule can happen when the kids are in the cafeteria >w< and he had the f***ing nerve to imply that 'asking' an eagle or whatever type of bird to fly with a ball in its claws or beak for however long can = infinity even though them mofo's need to eat and have kids it's also bs that he tried using a measurement of AFO's strength enhancement to get the MC's pitching score an infinity, there's so much more sh*it to talk about but that would be either after or before chap 10 within chaps I don't even remember the numbers of(since there's no f***ing chap titles) and I'm just not in the mood to get on a little fan boy's radar. Last thing I'll say is stop defending something when you can't even completely articulate the issues that it possesses, and don't waste spider sense.

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MHA : THE NEW SPIDER

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you expecting me to write full scale, no error, fully time consuming, pieces of absolute art for WN and that too for free????? Cause be practical here, I got no time to spend hours and hours to create and edit one chap that is very nice to read. This is FF you are reading here not a real LN. other creators don't update on WN because of the stuff WN pulls on them, I got nothing to do with it, if their story is nice, it would automatically be recommended, it's not like I am purposefully downplaying them. and that get nothing to why you review this. then to the next part, I clearly added in the tags that this is an AU, and if you know what that means, it's an alternate universe, changed things because that was how envisioned MY FF will be, it's MY imagination of that world and how it should have been. Unless I create something different than the cannon plot, it would be something that anyone can write, it would just feel. like copying the whole cannon story to words. I fuked the plot and fuked it big, I already stated in the starting chaps that I would do this and if someone like you, who doesn't like things to get off-cannon can leave there. And why the hell are you even complaining about Anime science???? We all know how bad it is, I said that out of detection range was infinity, in anime uraraka scored infinity cause the ball went up in atmosphere, and I can bet it it wouldn't have went any farther than 5Km, An eagle can fly for a very long time, not because it has powerful wings, but because it can glide in air using natural air currents, it's only fair that it takes the ball out of effective detection range (about 5-8 Km I presumed) , and that too won't take much time as they can fly at 120 Kmph. then you said there was hate against those who wrote 'honest' comment???? show me one where it was truly honest comment which got hated?? most people ask why this and why that, and I explain it all in replies. I don't really get the point why you want me to create some masterpiece for you, most people are already satisfied with what I explain, if you got some queries, ask them in the chap you have doubts, don't whine here

AmiOnigase
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Yeah, I'm out when I read about Dku fucking Assholes has quirk and still dumbass bastard

AmiOnigase
AmiOnigaseLv4AmiOnigase

Still even this is AU, you still ruin the core of story like this.. Seriously, Deku fucking Nerd has quirk and training for entire middle school but still weak and 'cant stand up for himself' bastard.. Come on..

Your_Drug_Supplier:you expecting me to write full scale, no error, fully time consuming, pieces of absolute art for WN and that too for free????? Cause be practical here, I got no time to spend hours and hours to create and edit one chap that is very nice to read. This is FF you are reading here not a real LN. other creators don't update on WN because of the stuff WN pulls on them, I got nothing to do with it, if their story is nice, it would automatically be recommended, it's not like I am purposefully downplaying them. and that get nothing to why you review this. then to the next part, I clearly added in the tags that this is an AU, and if you know what that means, it's an alternate universe, changed things because that was how envisioned MY FF will be, it's MY imagination of that world and how it should have been. Unless I create something different than the cannon plot, it would be something that anyone can write, it would just feel. like copying the whole cannon story to words. I fuked the plot and fuked it big, I already stated in the starting chaps that I would do this and if someone like you, who doesn't like things to get off-cannon can leave there. And why the hell are you even complaining about Anime science???? We all know how bad it is, I said that out of detection range was infinity, in anime uraraka scored infinity cause the ball went up in atmosphere, and I can bet it it wouldn't have went any farther than 5Km, An eagle can fly for a very long time, not because it has powerful wings, but because it can glide in air using natural air currents, it's only fair that it takes the ball out of effective detection range (about 5-8 Km I presumed) , and that too won't take much time as they can fly at 120 Kmph. then you said there was hate against those who wrote 'honest' comment???? show me one where it was truly honest comment which got hated?? most people ask why this and why that, and I explain it all in replies. I don't really get the point why you want me to create some masterpiece for you, most people are already satisfied with what I explain, if you got some queries, ask them in the chap you have doubts, don't whine here
UnknownJace
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You seriously need an editor.

UnknownJace
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You seriously need an editor.

NebulousArcana
NebulousArcanaLv14NebulousArcana

UnknownJace:You seriously need an editor.