Review Detail of TheKindlyGentleman in Marvel: The Homelander

The Grammar is good and mistakes few, but the sentences aren't very articulate (3/5) Story Development is poor: Massive timeskips of 3, 6 and 11 years at a time. The storyline has little to no direction and the few conflicts there are last 1 chapter at most. (2/5) The MC has no personality and the other characters act differently than movie cannon. Alternate perspectives are done poorly and the MC pulls new powers out of his ass(2/5) The story is in constant threat of being dropped because the author has lost all motivation to continue writing. The author has kept the chapters consistently long though. (3/5) The world background is a copy and paste of an established and successful cinematic universe, would have gotten 4/5 had the author not consistently screwed up the sequence of events and the ages of characters. It would also do the author well to describe the world more . (3/5) The story is bad, the authors attitude towards readers and his own work is terrible, but at least it is readable and somewhat enjoyable thus-far (as of chapter 13).