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BigStig97
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It's a good start with a couple of not so common wishes. The grammar needs work though. It's mostly ok and readable but there is usually a sentence every paragraph or two that ruins the flow and downgrades this Fic for me. Maybe use grammarly if you can't find a beta or just microsoft word.

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Marvel: The Homelander

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Golden_dragon444
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like the chapter..........m.....m..........