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Level1Goblin
Level1GoblinLv33yr
2021-09-13 07:33

The premise of the story sounds really good, but the execution of the story was just as bad as the execution of this batman's parents. Honestly I tried I really did. I wanted this story to be great. Pure cringe throughout and too fast paced in areas it needs to slow down for. In just a few paragraphs he has a 10 ish years relationship with Elektra and then gets betrayed by her in the same few paragraphs. That's just one example.

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Darwin111111
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I feel the same brother, it's disappointing.

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