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Dante_Luca
Dante_LucaLv33yrDante_Luca

In all honesty I didn't read enough chapters to give this kind of score. But I've got to say this novel has a lot of potential, there are a few grammar mistakes here and there but at the same time every novel that you will read will have these small grammar mistakes so it's alright. the author makes sure to update this novel frequently giving us a lot of chapters. as a said before I didn't read enough chapters yet, so I don't know if the story development is good or not, but at the first couple of chapters the story does progress in a nice and easy way helping the reader understand a bit about the history of the characters but not revealing too much. the character Design is very good as all of main characters in the beginning are described well and are talked about in an interesting manner. the world background is also very good at the first chapters from ancient times to current time. I'm going to continue reading this and give a better review with better details - I believe that if you have free time you should read this, the story is already very interesting in the first chapters. author-nim please keep up with the good work!

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Spirit Orbs : Chronicles of Ra'as

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R_F_T_SAuthorR_F_T_S

Thank you for such an uplifting review. I'm glad you are enjoying the story ☺️ Also I have already made corrections to the few grammatical errors you have pointed out thus far. I understand that might have been a pain but I still thank you for that Hope you continue to enjoy my work xd🤗

Dante_Luca
Dante_LucaLv3Dante_Luca

the grammar is more of a side problem, and I think that in this case it was really small, there are grammar mistakes in every novel so you don't need to worry about it. do your best author-nim O(∩_∩)O

R_F_T_S:Thank you for such an uplifting review. I'm glad you are enjoying the story ☺️ Also I have already made corrections to the few grammatical errors you have pointed out thus far. I understand that might have been a pain but I still thank you for that Hope you continue to enjoy my work xd🤗