Item: The Bloody Falcon
Rating: 5
Author: Mackfro

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2020-09-28 10:45

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The Bloody Falcon

John_sins1

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John_sins1Author

Shameless author review, I’ve always been really interested in the Vale and thought that they never had proper screen time. This is a what if situation. What if Jon Arryn had a capable heir, armed with future knowledge and a bunch of wishes. If anyone has any advice or suggestions let me know. This is my first project so i am sure there will be mistakes.

4yr

AlexKlimLv2

Interesting story so far. I eagerly await for more chapters. There are sadly not so many good fanfics in this fandom, this one looks to be on the way to becoming one of the great ones! I especially like the fact that the MC is a history buff. I really want to see snippets of his analisys of Planetos, it's realities, castles, etc. from that point of view. Main charater's choice of Origins and wishes is really good as well. Few people understand that Cap's serum in medieval settings is already OP on 'man vs man' and even 'man vs squad' level. That misunderstanding sadly leads to some cultivation OP bulls*it wishes which destroy the setting. Yours however should not detract from it since even knowledge wish only asks for Medieval and Renaissance knowhow, so that's great too. So, what I'm trying to say is: Author, please, continue this story, post more chapters and never be discouraged! I shall await for more most eagerly!!! **: On a personal note, couldn't agree more - F*ck the Tully, especially the wonder sister duo. Two dumb bit**es managed to kickstart so much s*it, I swear their childhood friend was soooo proud and happy... On that note, despite the respect his achievements garner, f*ck Littlefinger too. And the Riverlands as a whole while I'm ranting... PPS: Well, except for Blackfish, that one is badass as all hell.

4yr

Will_CarusoLv4

Great start!!!!!! MORE! MORE! MORE! MORE! MORE! MORE! MORE! MORE! MORE! MORE! MORE! MORE! MORE! MORE! MORE! MORE!MORE! MORE! MORE! MORE! MORE! MORE! MORE! MORE!MORE! MORE! MORE! MORE! MORE! MORE! MORE! MORE!MORE! MORE! MORE! MORE! MORE! MORE! MORE! MORE!MORE! MORE! MORE! MORE! MORE! MORE! MORE! MORE!

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JccrLv4

Very good fan of Game of Thrones, it didn't fall into the most stupid mistakes like a three year old giving orders to all the adults, and it's a relief since there aren't many Arryn fans and they are a great house with a lot to exploit unlike the most used ones like the Starks or Targaryen. Another positive point is that their desires are not totally extravagant which makes the story boring unlike many other fans who abuse their "wishes as reincarnation" and make the story absurd. Good work continues with the story 👍.

4yr

amaturewriterLv4

1- wishing for good looks is retarded. why waste a wish? 2- Author, cannon fked, U cant be someone so significant and think cannon will happen. MC is son of jon, a major player, cannon is gone. it might be fked to the point where robert and ned are gay for each other. Ur cannon knowledge is worthless. 3-The house MC choose is kinda bad, they aint rich or that powerful. Also since u choose and think cannon happens, vale had a messed up system cause of the mountain tribes. 4-What MC choose is hax, its heavily neutered but combined with his SI future and fictional knowledge the hax is still there. Why cant MC use this to better looker and create a magical super serum? it is the library of heavens path, or what it is. TBH, i am very interested in ur bk, cause this is the second of its kind, the first was dropped, but I kinda lost hope cause of the reasons 1 and 2. will read but eh.. . .................................................

4yr

JasonenrickLv14

I like it ! That's all you get xD I know, not that much, aye? Well, that's not my probelm! On another note, does anybody recognize these lyrcis? " You want me to forget you Okay, forget me too You tell me you hate me, baby Yeah, I bet you do I'm keepin' you waiting But I won't wait on you Want me to forget you Okay, forget me too " ***SPOILER*** Maschine Gun kelly -forget me too

4yr

Great_AbbyLv3

Author, please update soon!😭😭😭😭 I miss your chapters! I really hope you update soon, but I just wanted to let you know I miss this fanfic!

4yr

The_Battle_GodLv13

I always wanted a fanfiction about house Arryn ie, Vale. Always thought that house Arryn was not done justice in the series. looking forward for more chapters. And hope you don't drop it.

4yr

DebellatorLv4

Interesting! aaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaa

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selfinsertLv5

MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MOREMORE MORE MORE MOREMORE MORE MORE MORE

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