The books general idea and world building is good. Grammar needs a lot of work and is written like almost any cultivation book inhabe read but without cultivation in it thankfully( over used genre on this platform). If the grammar was fixed i would read more. read until chaoter 20 to give it fair chance but grammar is a big thing to me as a reader so if youndont mind bad grammar then its probably for you
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