Review Detail of Alexander_the_grey in A Fool's Change of Heart

I like the fact that you are writing a Persona ff. The way combat happens might need a bit more description, since most Person fans have only played the games, but it’s only the first dozen chapers for me and i am sure things will change in the future. The subtle changes in the story so far are good. Saving Shiho is a definite plus and not just avoiding the suicide scene completely was good. Only problem is how much off the dialogue is coming directly from the game. But i do understand that it is the tutorial part of the game, so creative freedom is limited. Hoping more off-script interactions will happen in the future. Persona 5 Royal and breaking a certain piece of shits arm was greatly appreciated. Hope you keep writting and don’t get tired since this is a good read.