Review Detail of DaoistToDieFor in The Dawn of Heroes

Well written start. I came up to your 6th chapter and so far I like it very much. Of course, I can't see yet the world development, but I can see his own. A female system is a nice addition. As I came up to the 6th chapter, I love the new character. Not going to give any spoiler. Hhehehehe. Truly well done.