I just came only to the 6th chapter and like the most... new side character. Sorry. But I have to admit that the way you explain the whole process makes me understand the beginning of a great story. You sat quite a good base for your novel. I promise I will make a review every twenty chapters. So the next one is at ch. 20. Have fun writing it. You are doing a good job so far.
Kotachua
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