Review Detail of insertsound in The Dawn of Heroes

I like the mix of genres! Superpowers and System are practically the same thing, but mix in a little bit of military in there makes it interesting. There are a few grammar mistakes here and there, but that can easily be improved! The character designs are nice, and the world-building is the best part of it. I haven't read all of the chapters yet, but overall I'm giving it a 4.6. Good luck, author! This looks promising!