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EugenSimion
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2020-10-21 20:57

I love how the story is written and about who it is written. I believe this is the first fanfiction I actually read about the Grandmaster. Also, the fact that the author is not throwing himself first head and actually writes a background for the story is also very nice. As such I believe this story is worth 5 stars!

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Frank_Noble
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Thank you for your support.

amaturewriter
amaturewriterLv4

hey man...does rape, NTR, etc like that happen? could ya tell?

EugenSimion
EugenSimionLv14

Nothing like that so far in the story. And from the stile, I don't think there will be any. The only thing I can think of is if what happened to Bini Dong will be mentioned or not.

amaturewriter:hey man...does rape, NTR, etc like that happen? could ya tell?
amaturewriter
amaturewriterLv4

thank you

EugenSimion:Nothing like that so far in the story. And from the stile, I don't think there will be any. The only thing I can think of is if what happened to Bini Dong will be mentioned or not.
Mans_1_Not_2_Hot_3
Mans_1_Not_2_Hot_3Lv10

Is this harem? I hope not.

Frank_Noble:Thank you for your support.
EugenSimion
EugenSimionLv14

Well, it depends on how you look at it, considering that he only gets together with Liu Erlong and there will be Bibi Dong, but that's about all there is to it. Xiaogang isn't planning on being a harem king or anything like that. So him being together with those 2 I wouldn't consider this story being a harem one.

Mans_1_Not_2_Hot_3:Is this harem? I hope not.
Mans_1_Not_2_Hot_3
Mans_1_Not_2_Hot_3Lv10

I don't like harems or polygamy at all.

EugenSimion:Well, it depends on how you look at it, considering that he only gets together with Liu Erlong and there will be Bibi Dong, but that's about all there is to it. Xiaogang isn't planning on being a harem king or anything like that. So him being together with those 2 I wouldn't consider this story being a harem one.
Mans_1_Not_2_Hot_3
Mans_1_Not_2_Hot_3Lv10

I just don't understand why people can't make a good wish fulfillment novel without adding a harem, power doesn't = instant harem or polygamist relationship. I know for a cultivation setting it's normal if you have power that you can get more girls but how many of them are actually loyal? Plus I've been disappointed too many times by novels with or without a harem or polygamist relationship that I avoid romance novels all together.

EugenSimion:Well, it depends on how you look at it, considering that he only gets together with Liu Erlong and there will be Bibi Dong, but that's about all there is to it. Xiaogang isn't planning on being a harem king or anything like that. So him being together with those 2 I wouldn't consider this story being a harem one.
EugenSimion
EugenSimionLv14

This one is actually good. Besides the romance is actually well written and as for the second girl, Bibi Dong, well she wasn't even introduced as of yet, so you don't have to worry about it being rushed or totally unreal.

Mans_1_Not_2_Hot_3:I just don't understand why people can't make a good wish fulfillment novel without adding a harem, power doesn't = instant harem or polygamist relationship. I know for a cultivation setting it's normal if you have power that you can get more girls but how many of them are actually loyal? Plus I've been disappointed too many times by novels with or without a harem or polygamist relationship that I avoid romance novels all together.
Mans_1_Not_2_Hot_3
Mans_1_Not_2_Hot_3Lv10

Okay I'll give it a try then

EugenSimion:This one is actually good. Besides the romance is actually well written and as for the second girl, Bibi Dong, well she wasn't even introduced as of yet, so you don't have to worry about it being rushed or totally unreal.
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