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This is an honest review! Grammer is bad basic spelling mistakes every where in every chapter author seriously needs a good spell checker program or a person to edit your stuff. Updates are stabilized so no complaints there. Story development has plot holes galor and feels like author changes his mind after saying one thing or it may just be because the wording is bad and i dont understand properly either way oh well. Character design is honestly pretty good i enjoy most characters but as for their way of thinking some of the one time onyk seeing guys or few time seeing guys just do stuff that dont add up but the main ones i like. World background is non existent just about it but he learns more as it goes on but i still feel there’s plenty missing that could be explained better.

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Also would like to add that story development in the beginning is slow slow doing the same thing for so long it got boring and mc is illogical in trusting so easily after being 100+ years old at best in a cultivation world