in less than 10 days the Mc went from being the weakest person in the village to being the strongest person in the region. the mc progression is to fast and his being given powerups after power ups with their being no real story.
ranmaro
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LIKEthe mc is running before he could evenre walk. you keep introducing new characters within the storys first week time frame you introduced 30 new character and forgot about 20 by next week. only to add another 30 character
ranmaro:If you mean amidst the clans filled with mortals with no powers at all, someone with super powers appeared like him, then it's logic to crush everyone in mere days. Dunno what's illogical about this, but I respect ur opinion though :)