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2020-11-01 14:54

The story plot is pretty good. And the content is very fresh.The mysterious way of telling your story would definitely attract more reader. Good luck to you.

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Zuxian
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Thanks so much writer. I appreciate. ♥️♥️

CliffkunLolRekt
CliffkunLolRektLv6

My Question is are you going to put this behind the Dreaded paywall i hope not as im a collage student and cant aford it if you Need money pls do patr eon Also just making shure you will never do ntr wifu rape or wifu killing Also not make the mc have amnisia

Zuxian:Thanks so much writer. I appreciate. ♥️♥️
Zuxian
ZuxianAuthor

To be fair enough, dear writer. I won't add rape and possibly not killing to it. I don't think it's in the plot. About monetizing it, that's one of the motivations of a writer: Getting paid for what you love doing. But I won't monetize until chapter 40. I hope that you understand what this means. And about amnisia, I can't dictate for my muse. He tells me what my character looks like and what my Chapters would reflect. I hope this answers your questions. Thanks for your opinions. Meant a lot.

CliffkunLolRekt:My Question is are you going to put this behind the Dreaded paywall i hope not as im a collage student and cant aford it if you Need money pls do patr eon Also just making shure you will never do ntr wifu rape or wifu killing Also not make the mc have amnisia
CliffkunLolRekt
CliffkunLolRektLv6

Well The monatisation part Is not always a motivation for authors and when it is some kind authors use patrion And spam asking any readers willing Im a collage student so i cant afford it even if i wanted to i live off cup of noodles Eggs and bulk hamburger i For Bread if i get flour cheep i Mix four and water with sone 99cent garlic powder And cook it at a frends house Novels and video games are my only stress reliever So in sorry if i get touchy about the pay wall but Its a thorn in my side considering it shows novels with 150+ chapters but i cant get to it past 60 its like showing a thirsty man in a desert a water bottle and throwing it in a safe he cant hope to open Just take out the whole a man in a desert would die part lol

Zuxian:To be fair enough, dear writer. I won't add rape and possibly not killing to it. I don't think it's in the plot. About monetizing it, that's one of the motivations of a writer: Getting paid for what you love doing. But I won't monetize until chapter 40. I hope that you understand what this means. And about amnisia, I can't dictate for my muse. He tells me what my character looks like and what my Chapters would reflect. I hope this answers your questions. Thanks for your opinions. Meant a lot.
Zuxian
ZuxianAuthor

I think I got your point, but somehow I'll be hurting myself. You don't know what authors also are facing. Do you know if most are writing to make their livings? So, twill be unfair to tell them not to monetize. And Patreon is not favorable for all writers. I hope you understand.

CliffkunLolRekt:Well The monatisation part Is not always a motivation for authors and when it is some kind authors use patrion And spam asking any readers willing Im a collage student so i cant afford it even if i wanted to i live off cup of noodles Eggs and bulk hamburger i For Bread if i get flour cheep i Mix four and water with sone 99cent garlic powder And cook it at a frends house Novels and video games are my only stress reliever So in sorry if i get touchy about the pay wall but Its a thorn in my side considering it shows novels with 150+ chapters but i cant get to it past 60 its like showing a thirsty man in a desert a water bottle and throwing it in a safe he cant hope to open Just take out the whole a man in a desert would die part lol
CliffkunLolRekt
CliffkunLolRektLv6

True sigh Ill just stick to the fanfiction Section

Zuxian:I think I got your point, but somehow I'll be hurting myself. You don't know what authors also are facing. Do you know if most are writing to make their livings? So, twill be unfair to tell them not to monetize. And Patreon is not favorable for all writers. I hope you understand.
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