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2021-01-06 07:25

it has been a while since I've read a book like this. But reading this book reminded me that they are people like Ashley out there who are facing what's she facing or even worse. The book is so relatable and I love it for that. You guys should totally read this.

Cloven(Broken)

oyslyness
4.6
67 Chs

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melancholy_sins0
melancholy_sins0Lv2

Reveal spoiler

4yr

oyslyness
oyslynessAuthor

Hey guysssssssss it's me again.  I hope you've all been goooooood and I hope you are all staying safe out there!!!!! I thought of something a couple of days ago and I want all your thoughts on this. I'm thinking of making 'Cloven (Broken) 2'!!!!!! What y'all think???? The story of Ashley and Christian continues.  More set backs More fights More lies More breaking moments New enemies and new loses Can the love they have for each other withstand and surpass all? Is their love strong enough? Is it the real cause of their downfall or was it just an highschool fling all along? Stay tuned and find out more in Cloven(Broken)2 So comment away!!!! And let me know if their story should have a part two. Your comments will determine their future!!!!

3yr
Glenstonx
GlenstonxLv2

Hi author, I read your work, and it was somehow relatable and it was sad, at some point. I was amazed that you can make a story like this, I hope the Mc can find its happiness soon, please make a good ending for this one, I hope you would. Regards, Glenstonx

3yr
rydertheking
ryderthekingLv11

A great read! I will say, seeing how much problems Trish has in her life and how she is moving forward is really empowering! The only thing i'll give advice on is that you re-read what you had written and edit it so that it is much more clearer to read. If you do that then in no time, you'll have a great book! ^_^ from ryder

4yr
book_struck
book_struckLv1

Hi. I love this book! I love the way the author uses relatable in the book. I also like the way Trish and Christian try and help Ashley. I can't wait for the next update. Keep it up!!!!

3yr
veronica_nunoo
veronica_nunooLv11

Herr author u are the best. But when I was reading I realized that I have really read this story somewhere actually on this same app just that there were some twists in it but it was the same and it's titled My Mission. But I really loved it . Thanks for this story . Hope you see slot of your books

3yr
DARK_NIGHT
DARK_NIGHTLv1

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3yr
popsbooksup
popsbooksupLv1

I love this book!!!! Normally I don't read this kind of books but I'm very happy I stumbled upon this one. The plot is amazing even though a little bit fast, editing is needed and although it has a tragic ending, it's still good. This is definitely a five star book

3yr
Lua_Kai
Lua_KaiLv1

A very enjoyable read. I find the characters to be super relatable and well written. There are some minor mistakes here and there but the story makes up for it.

3yr
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