Review Detail of Jai_pareek in Harry Potter The Mutant Obscurus Gamer

i dont man, the idea was good, First few chapter were good, the whole harry potter arc was rushed with little development in his relationship with others. second arc was boring, keep hiding powers for three arcs hence I got bored...comedy aspect us good, if you have nothing to read then go ahead but you will probably get frustrated by the third arc and then drop this.