Review Detail of JayFireblood in Harry Potter The Mutant Obscurus Gamer

Written at chapter 115. This story is pretty good, a good mix of marvel and harry potter. A bit on the crack side but still good. The story definitely starts to drop in quality in latter chapters and this is mainly due to adding the onmiverse to early in my opinion. The author should fix a few major problems which are. 1. jumping from one thing to other (I.e going from the wizarding world to study as a sorcerer.) 2. not showing harry very working on anything but just showing new tools and weapons. 3. not making it fairly clear if a character is dead or not. 4. not really showing harry interacting with other characters.