Review Detail of White_Liger in Harry Potter The Mutant Obscurus Gamer

Out of 10 how you merged the worlds, how was the character development, even the harem doesn't feel forced damn that's something that I have a hard time writing like crap not forcing a harem haha, it's one of the best works I read from Marvel and HP congratulations **: Any advice not to force a harem? I'm new to writing haha