Review Detail of GnomeBob in Harry Potter The Mutant Obscurus Gamer
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My writing style generally involved me writing myself into a corner and then trying to figure out how I'm going to get out of it. So don't expect to be able to predict what will happen next because before I've written the end, even I have no idea how I'm going to get out of it. I have specific things I want to do with the story and pretty much the whole story is just those scenes and the filler between. You can tell this from the Hogwarts Arc where I skipped most of the boring parts and went straight to the fun parts. Because of this, I'd say the story moves at a good pace.
Harry Potter The Mutant Obscurus Gamer
GnomeBob
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It's not deleted, though just now I did click on your name and checked out if you've written any stories. Should I have been surprised to see you have not and that your history shows a string of negative reviews in barely legible english? It's one thing to support a story you like, but to leave a string of negative reviews simply shows the type of person you are. I honestly pity you and hope you find some happiness because its obvious at the moment you have nothing and no one.
GnomeBob:It's not deleted, though just now I did click on your name and checked out if you've written any stories. Should I have been surprised to see you have not and that your history shows a string of negative reviews in barely legible english? It's one thing to support a story you like, but to leave a string of negative reviews simply shows the type of person you are. I honestly pity you and hope you find some happiness because its obvious at the moment you have nothing and no one.
Yeah, im Gnomebob. Another guy actually posted a few chapters of my fic on this site and I told him if he deleted it I'd post it myself.
dragons_fire:Are you the same author that posts on F*nFiction.Net? Just wondering if your stealing or not... ✌️
Cool, I like this fic and didn’t want you to be demotivated by other people stealing your work... luckily this isn’t the case 😁✌️
GnomeBob:Yeah, im Gnomebob. Another guy actually posted a few chapters of my fic on this site and I told him if he deleted it I'd post it myself.
spoiler..... > > > > > > > > so far its Jean, wanda and rouge. there should be 2 more that will be revealed later.
amaturewriter:i like ur shit. **: who love interests?
Zerak:spoiler..... > > > > > > > > so far its Jean, wanda and rouge. there should be 2 more that will be revealed later.
it's good but why rouge though ...there are plenty interesting female chars I think ororo / storm should have been paired well with mc or Emma Frost or even that century old mutant witch of hellclub I forgot the name ...
Zerak:spoiler..... > > > > > > > > so far its Jean, wanda and rouge. there should be 2 more that will be revealed later.
The author said that he will only pair people who are on his power level (or can keep up) so Emma is out the window. As for storm she is with Logan if I am not mistaken. He said it is biased on an abandoned timeline where Logan and storm were together but Logan had to go back in time to fix something and it butterfly’s that relationship out the window. I could be mixing this with another marvel fanfic but I am 90% sure it’s this one that pairs Logan and storm.
Deadrule_vivek:it's good but why rouge though ...there are plenty interesting female chars I think ororo / storm should have been paired well with mc or Emma Frost or even that century old mutant witch of hellclub I forgot the name ...
