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2023-11-16 20:28

Muy Buena Historia y Secuencia. El Trama Está Muy Bien Desarrollado.

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Es dificil describir lo satisfecho que estoy... For the sake of advertisement, I shall do this review in English. Con el proposito de publicidad, hare esta review en Ingles. Writing Quality: Nigh Perfect Spanish, proper accentuation, the only issue I find is delivery but for English speakers, it shouldn't give you any issue translating this text in google or DeepL. Stability of Updates: Just by seeing the number of chapters, you should have an Idea. Truly the author's perseverance. Character Design: Perfect, 10 stars: Best made OCs I have ever seen. Story Development: More Perfect, 20 stars: This story moves forward too fast, so fast it is actually bad for the story, I hoped it would have more chapters to get more into depth in all the things happening around the world and MC. World Background: Extra Perfect, 30 stars: Time, Locations, weather, background, and world descriptions are never lacking in any chapter. Now my personal opinion. I find myself with found emotions reading the first volume of this novel. It has a few shortcomings... and Flaws that I don't like. But on a personal level, the author just took everything I'd ever wished in a Harem novel and put it in one single volume. And least in the harem sense, there is no doubt, this is the best harem I've ever read and boe I've read a lot of 'em. Let's put them all together: 1.- There is so much vanilla you will leave this please obese and with diabetes. 2.- Challenge, every girl is different they have their own personalities, some are hard to get, some aren't, sometimes they fight with MC, basically, they're not dolls. 3.- MC first girls literally went from servants to fking CEOs of their own company, there's no one of them that's useless, they're not dolls waiting for MC to fk'em and that's it, there are even times MC is at home but they are not because they're working and If there is something I like is successful women, and boe all of them are here, with very few exceptions. 4.- There is no woman in MC's harem that you won't like and there is no woman that will give you a 'neutral' reaction to her, basically, sometimes there are heroines that you don't even care they're there, in my case, it didn't happen. 5.- Best of all: *spoiler* MC won't take any girls through the multiverse or whatever nonsense, he lives his life with them, they die of old age and MC moves on. The way it should be. We got a great development with them, MC and them had kids and were happy, they lived till old age and then they passed away if anything I hated was the lack of drama that could be exploited regarding this subject, but well, it wasn't that bad either. Now let's move to the plot, which is another strong forte in this novel. I don't know others, but the typical 'Otaku was killed by truck-kun and choose and anime and some powers' is the most ridiculous and sickening thing I've read, sometimes it is fun if they know how to handle it, but most of the times, it is sickening. The stories I enjoy the most is when authors take a protagonist or character already defined and insert it in another world as a crossover, MC is not aware that he's in a fictional world at all and doesn't know the events that will happen, that's the best fanfic for me. And this is basically that. MC is Kain from Legacy of Kain, which is a very old game that I used to play when I was a kid... I liked to go through the walls with the sword and that was about it. Now. the premise of an OP vampire not only in power but inexperience going to a world like Madan no Ou, it got me... And it was perfectly developed here. Chapters are very long, and for the most part of the volume, it was like an original story. There first girls of the harem are OCs and they are so well designed and developed that you can't believe they're actually OCs. I could extend myself more but this would be an endless review so... I encourage you to translate this masterpiece and read it if you're an English speaker. Si hablas espanol, échale un vistazo a este novelon.

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