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Not a comprehensive review;I just wanted to show the author some appreciaion for what I thought was an excellent story. Qual: Pretty good. The story flows well enough that I did not notice any errors. Updates: Nothing to complain about since I only just saw this story a few hours ago. Dev`p: Pretty good and out of the norm. Got annoyed at the idea of tourneys but this was almost immediately discarded.The tourney in this instance was actually pretty sensible. The School War itself was somewhat irrational - given there is a Vampire-led autocracy on the outside that would imply the Mages need to unite. Plus, the class divide is such that it is a recipe for trouble later on since the disenfranchised will always seek an outlet if they are ignnored too long. I would harzard that the ruling Mage class of those with bloodlines are far stronger than the Vampires and their human minions since the 2 vampires could not take down a single advanced Mage. Plus, the indications of the existence of truly destruction spells like that 'troublemaker' spell seems to imply that such internal divisions among the Mages makes sense in some way since they are in an unassailable position. Char: Pretty ok. I am not comfy with some of the decisions he has adopted,but this is a difficult one to manage. World: Like story dev`p, this is well advanced. We did not see much of the other world they share but the little we did see makes good sense. The Magic world and rules are well thought out and managed. Cough cough... ot good giving out 5 stars...people get big heads you know...would have applied it to the updates section but that would have been unfair... ok, will review this once more a few weeks down the lines...should have something to nit-pick on if only about the number of new chapters!

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