Review Detail of mssuigeneris in Tales of the Legendary Magus

I came here in search for the most deserving winner of WPC140 because I participated in the previous one myself, and I'd like to see how well the participants are doing for this biweekly prompt. I'd say, among all entries, this one is the most deserving for the gold tier award. It doesn't disappoint. Writing - I love the style and the tone used for this. It's light, fun, and has a refreshing feel to it. I don't need to stress myself with grammar pet peeves because this has little to no error at all. Very understandable for a casual reader. Stability - very steady, keep it up Characters - gold-tier description, and they are really entertaining that they hardly make u bored Development - nice, nice pace. I enjoy the comedy and the seemingly easy flow of the story's progression World - vet vivid imagery, keep it up again! Good luck! Hope u win! Read this everyone!