It's really well written and everything is clear, and the story also have a smooth flow. The characters are simple,not overalt complex(for now) and we never get a typcal plot armour setting. Every thing of the characters powers feel earned. At the time of writing (ch 14) we have no major wish fullfilment tropes (a large harem and god like power) The world background is one pice, but at the same time it creates a backstory of major characters that we never learned more about. And said backstories serve true too how and why said characters are as they are in the original work. You are doing a great work dear author
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