Review Detail of amaturewriter in One Piece - My name is Bonez, Daz Bonez
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Love the idea, and the execution. SI , daz bones dope, and his OG power too, and before cannon, about atleast over a decade before cannon, nice. The personality is also nice, selfish but has morals, as long as he is smart and not a evil cunt its fine. Its also great that u are seeing the OP world for what it is rather than some happy shit. Would really like to see MC use knowledge for advantage and shit. Especially sciences and fictional knowledge. Just dont make mc apervert friendly retard. Any relationships just build and no rush. And dont make Love interest useless sluts Suggestion. Do u know breathing arts from demon slayer? Maybe implement it to mc? He is a blade. It could be like bending from avatar even. Do u know Chi blocking from avatar? Something like that with haki? Also mc power is cutting, and since its paramacia....do u know gildarts crash magic? Something like that? On a side note, seeing ur bk is darker..how much? I am fine with dark shit as long as i can seeing it coming. Dont like surprises regarding that. Ex: a story i recently read had an MC living in the past and was more or less a slice of life but its latest chp was that of a child being more or less raped, and it was kinda vividly described . Threw me off cause i didnt expect it. So my point is will things like this happen? How dark is dark? Anyway, love ur shit so far. GL
One Piece - My name is Bonez, Daz Bonez
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First of all, thank you for the lengthy review. I always appreciate those :-) Now to answer your questions: No, I do not not demon slayer, never watched it I'm afraid. I've already thought about implementing some things from avatar as I'm writing an avatar story offline right now, which I may or may not post some day, but nothing concrete has been formulated yet. Concerning the darker side of the story: there will be no explicit rape scenes as far as I know. Of course it is always hard to predict what may come to pass in my story when it is just at the beginning so I can at least assure you that in the case I do write one of those it will be with a warning and not a necessity to read it. What I mainly meant by dark is more in the direction of gore, even though I'm not sure yet how far I'll take that. I mainly put the dark marker in case my story took a turn for the darker side of dark. Hope I answered most of your questions and maybe I'll see you around in the future :-)
what about dark shit? how dark is the question? like normal murder and gore...or in depth rape, torture etc?
bobbarker12:First of all, thank you for the lengthy review. I always appreciate those :-) Now to answer your questions: No, I do not not demon slayer, never watched it I'm afraid. I've already thought about implementing some things from avatar as I'm writing an avatar story offline right now, which I may or may not post some day, but nothing concrete has been formulated yet. Concerning the darker side of the story: there will be no explicit rape scenes as far as I know. Of course it is always hard to predict what may come to pass in my story when it is just at the beginning so I can at least assure you that in the case I do write one of those it will be with a warning and not a necessity to read it. What I mainly meant by dark is more in the direction of gore, even though I'm not sure yet how far I'll take that. I mainly put the dark marker in case my story took a turn for the darker side of dark. Hope I answered most of your questions and maybe I'll see you around in the future :-)
amaturewriter:what about dark shit? how dark is the question? like normal murder and gore...or in depth rape, torture etc?
The_Oldest_King:You are everywhere. LOL But in general I have seen that we have several similar points of view, and your criticisms are quite correct, in my opinion. I will read this novel đ¤
When will he learn haki? Armament would be difficult to learn by himself, but Observation will be easier in comparison since we already saw the training method in canon.... Also, Has he realized that Rob is Lucci yet? I am a bit confused about that....
bobbarker12:don't know yet. Don't care much for romance at the moment when it comes to the story.
The_Oldest_King:You are everywhere. LOL But in general I have seen that we have several similar points of view, and your criticisms are quite correct, in my opinion. I will read this novel đ¤
darkergrim:Bro i see you everywhere lol And damn you the one that always Criticises most novels didnât criticise this das means itâs goood well ima read itimage
" On a side note, seeing ur bk is darker..how much? I am fine with dark shit as long as i can seeing it coming. Dont like surprises regarding that. Ex: a story i recently read had an MC living in the past and was more or less a slice of life but its latest chp was that of a child being more or less raped, and it was kinda vividly described . Threw me off cause i didnt expect it. So my point is will things like this happen? How dark is dark? " ------------ How dark is dark? [not many people like dark shit like child rape, rape, torture, etc. if its mentioned fine. but sometimes writers are extremely explicit. I like realism, and u need dark shit but there should be a limit]
Ballad:why the **** do people care about Dark stuff I love that stuff it's realistic unlike wannabe hero happy go lucky characters just saying
You must 'love' wattpad then that place is a cess pool of the most outrageously dark shit for no reason ive ever seen also liked your review interesting suggestions btw
amaturewriter: " On a side note, seeing ur bk is darker..how much? I am fine with dark shit as long as i can seeing it coming. Dont like surprises regarding that. Ex: a story i recently read had an MC living in the past and was more or less a slice of life but its latest chp was that of a child being more or less raped, and it was kinda vividly described . Threw me off cause i didnt expect it. So my point is will things like this happen? How dark is dark? " ------------ How dark is dark? [not many people like dark shit like child rape, rape, torture, etc. if its mentioned fine. but sometimes writers are extremely explicit. I like realism, and u need dark shit but there should be a limit]
wattpad has interesting stories but its like they are written by emo kids with no understanding of emotions. think neglect naruto ff , but naruto always gets raped, etc and yet he forgives everyone and is a happy go lucky kid. u read and u just give up. like what is wrong with em
PaperCrow:You must 'love' wattpad then that place is a cess pool of the most outrageously dark shit for no reason ive ever seen also liked your review interesting suggestions btw
XD thats what i was saying like geez some of those stories on there need to be toned th heck down. :*D
amaturewriter:wattpad has interesting stories but its like they are written by emo kids with no understanding of emotions. think neglect naruto ff , but naruto always gets raped, etc and yet he forgives everyone and is a happy go lucky kid. u read and u just give up. like what is wrong with em
dammm definitely feel this shit like thats why i hate harem mostly cause they get inlove stupiditly left and right and like how they make friends left and right like wtf...i like it more realistic when it comes to how they are as a person cause thats 1 thing you cant really make a fiction of thats why author needs to know how they want their charaCter to grow as and make sure their experience will be decent and not have 0% to 100% different personality lol
Dadido:dammm definitely feel this shit like thats why i hate harem mostly cause they get inlove stupiditly left and right and like how they make friends left and right like wtf...i like it more realistic when it comes to how they are as a person cause thats 1 thing you cant really make a fiction of thats why author needs to know how they want their charaCter to grow as and make sure their experience will be decent and not have 0% to 100% different personality lol