Wow! Honestly... It felt like I was there in every scenery. I can imagine what's happening because of the well-defined characteristics of each and every detail. Overall, it was good. The writing quality is good, simple words were chosen with great impact for me as a reader. The story development, honestly... I can't still state that it was totally great, I suggest having more chapters in which the reader can fully see the character's development too. I love the characters, the roles of Imani and Lola specifically ^^- but wait, Desmond is so cute lmao. Yaayyy! I'm having fun reading it, more chapters, please! Keep it up, author! You're doing great~!
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