Review Detail of amaturewriter in Wings Of A Crow

IDK things to avoid? writers who did ur idea did the following things, maybe avoid it? 1- dont make MC handsome that girls always notice it. IE: ' OMG so handsome ' . or ' never seen a man that handsome. so goodlooking ', ' its like the gods sculpted him ' . its weird to read and removes any chance of CD build 2-Dont change personality to much. itachi killed babies, children, mom, dad, and cared for no one [sasuke]....dont change this and make him care for the first chick he sees or first people he sees. 3-he is smart, super smart. show it. dont make him a idiot 4-he is a person that more or less hide his true power, true ideals, true character, etc. try to do same. itachi never fought with true power against anyone. sasuke even [he half dead ]. 5- He is OP, even heavily neutered he was still top 40 - 30 strongest in naruto, and that world is equal to FT [ except magic eyes characters and ninja jesus and god..they stronger ] didnt say u did it, saying to avoid. no order, just suggestion. anywa GL