it's a great story, he seems overpowered in the first couple chapters because of his fire, but he really isn't. The world is absolutely great. if there was anything to add it would be describing locations and their size more effectively while keeping it relatively short. the characters are likeable as well as not overly complex leading to an enjoyable read where you don't have to focus your brain to hard. if anything I would appreciate fleshing out the fire contracts from the beginning. Keep up the fabulous work it should honestly not be to hard to get this book to 2000+ chapters. you have multiple worlds with God's. you can integrate with pathways new worlds. you. could even say there's other system gods out there and now there's a war between the systems fused worlds and another. you can do angels vs demons. you could even add kingdom building with his new tower. there is so much possibility it's insane honestly what a well though out world that's not only clear cut, but with lots of exploration available as well as flexibility without breaking preconvieved logic
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