Read till chapter 22. Overall a very good novel. The only problem I have with this novel is that the story until now occurs in 3 or 4 days since Mc's Transmigration. I am not saying that plot progression is slow but it just doesn't feel believable for this much plot progression occurs in first four days. Try doing short time skips (days to weeks but not years). By that I mean, make Mc's Age progression along with plot progression. Spread out plot progression along Mc's schooling & ***** years instead of compacting it by doing plot progression Day by Day. You will be burnt out to write content very quickly. But this is Author's novel. He can do whatever he wants with his novel.
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Hey, thanks for the review! Yes, you are completely correct. I was actually planning on doing timeskips after this first week in the novel just to start getting everything set up. The plot progression indeed doesn't feel believable and I more or less realize it now even more reading this. I'll try to spread it now more. Thank you very much for the review!
good for you.... I'm start reading this.... hope it's good
CyanSuch:Hey, thanks for the review! Yes, you are completely correct. I was actually planning on doing timeskips after this first week in the novel just to start getting everything set up. The plot progression indeed doesn't feel believable and I more or less realize it now even more reading this. I'll try to spread it now more. Thank you very much for the review!
