Review Detail of Nullabutton in Queens Not Only For Kingdom But Also For Lives

I can't decide which of the twins I like more :p The world you've built is both intriguing and believable. The characters are actually very well designed and aren't trope-ridden at all. Kudos! Having said that, I personally am not a big fan of using scene-headings such as "XXX kingdom," "20 years later," etc. They are more appropriate for scripts. I'm an oldguard who likes them written out like "Meanwhile in XX kingdom," or "20 years have passed since ~" Not saying you should, but it wouldn't hurt to consider the option.