20 ch in and no kingdom building has occurred. High quality writing but a misleading title. If you want a story with intrigue and a dark setting, then this is for you. If you want the challenges of governance, setting up a kingdom, leading armies, etc. I have no clue when it will start given the stories pacing.
MoeJam90
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LIKEI get that but given most stories on the site and the title, I figured it would be more direct. I think a title aimed at showing how he rises from the lowliest slave to the highest position using the experience of his reincarnation could be more fitting. Of course that is all my opinion.
MoeJam90:It will start at the latter chapters...Bte, thanks for the review. I know that the title says kingdom building. .but if you think about it, he's a slave...so its gonna take sometime...
Bleedsfromeyeballs:I get that but given most stories on the site and the title, I figured it would be more direct. I think a title aimed at showing how he rises from the lowliest slave to the highest position using the experience of his reincarnation could be more fitting. Of course that is all my opinion.