Found your book recently, and was instantly hooked. Can't wait for more chapters. Writing Quality: Great writing. No obvious grammatical errors. Good sentence. Story Development: Very interesting plots. Has multiple plots for different characters going on. Curious on how these plots will interact. Character Design: MC isn't flawless, feels human. MC can grow as a character, and isn't that over powered. Side characters also feel real. They have history, problems/issues to work through. Updating Stability: Decent chapter rate. Consistent and author will say if something delays an update. World Background: Great worldbuilding.
MoeJam90
Liked by 6 people
LIKESorry, good ser, but I might ruin the thrill of the plot if I answer this. However, I shall tell you this, in wars and conquest there will be casualties.
The content has been deleted
I am planning for a story that doesn't involve that trope. But I will insert female companions here and there but not as a means of fan service but rather an interesting character with woes and narrative.
SerBlueom:For real? Because this might be a serious downside
No no problem, I actually enjoy female companions when done in moderation, i dropped mutagen for that reason when the author made up random reasons for mostly female companions and killed off the only oTher males despite making them seem like they were important
MoeJam90:I am planning for a story that doesn't involve that trope. But I will insert female companions here and there but not as a means of fan service but rather an interesting character with woes and narrative.